here's the challenge from aya: > 50 WORD Challenge! (yep you read it right, 50 > words) smut optional, > but worth pats on the head, using the following line > as your first > sentence: > > Holy S#!^! You're a virgin?

title: Sacrifice

author: nw's chick

disclaimer: not mine. don't sue.

summary: "Holy S#!^! You're a virgin?" first line 50 word challenge response...

~*~

"Holy S#!^! You're a virgin? But... I thought... Steph?"

"No."

"Oh."

"... She's cautious. Now. And I..."

Babs knows. She thought it was harmless. A crush.

She didn't know he was hurting.

"I... understand."

"Yeah."

"He's..."

"With you. You guys... work."

Barbara bit her lip.

Tim smiled. "I only want him to be happy, after all."

~*~

ha! that's fifty words!! er, if you don't count the opening five... well. they're part of the challenge. yup.

eh, it's not very good, but oh well...

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